Modblog 11

 Modblog 11

This writing sample was submitted by a newly qualified teacher working in Year 1. Please feel free to add any comments, suggested assessment levels and questions. This process has been a big help to me as a teacher in terms of consistency and confidence in my own judgements. If you would like to share writing for moderation with other teachers ( anonymously unless you prefer otherwise) then please get in touch by emailing: modblog@hotmail.com

Year 1 writing: Typed up as written by the pupil

In the deep dark dark words. There is mistycle witches house whith a blue roof and vins all arownd it becose... it is aaa wwwitches howwwwse. There are luvle sparlkly shooting stars leeding up to the witchs house.

 

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The Criterion Scale is reprodeuced with kind permission from Ros Wilson.